by Amber

Dammit Janet!

Screams echo through the nearby
Cemetery trees .. Reverberating
A scream 🙀 so loud it can be🧏🏻‍♀️
Heard miles away .. I cannot ..
Understand how you just flipped
My favorite cybertruck while 🤬
Cheating on me with my favorite
Musician of ALL TIME ⏰ Denny😿
Cries out in anguish, storming⛈️
Away .. She’s supposed to be MY
Journalist .. how dare she? and
That’s not even the worst part😡
They ran off to some island 🏝️✨
Leaving me here to clean up the
Whole mess .. even the universe!
Who does that? NO.. Seriously 😒
WHO DOES JANET THINK 💭 she is..
I love her with all that I am  &
Well there is nothing she can do
About it now..It’s all been done
BEFORE 🏝️✨💕⛈️😇🪽 Peter flies
Down in a hole feeling so small🗝️

17 thoughts on “Dammit Janet!”

  5. Nice job Amber. I wrote a story for my friends daughter who is autistic. I’ve been writing for her since she was 5 now she is all grownup. Chanel is a straight A student and an amazing artist. Her mother Phil was sad that some people don’t understand autism and can be mean so I made my goal to use my writing to always share with her in the stories and she loves it. Phil and Chanel are happy to be apart of my life. They are important people in my life I love them.

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  9. This piece conveys a sense of betrayal, heartbreak, and confusion, with a dash of surreal imagery. The protagonist expresses frustration over being cheated on, not just by anyone, but with someone they idolize—their favorite musician. The scene is set in a chaotic emotional landscape, where even the flipping of a beloved cybertruck becomes symbolic of a larger, deeper pain.

    Janet, the subject of affection, has escaped to an island with someone else, leaving the protagonist to face the aftermath. The dramatic tone of the storm, anguish, and screams echo through the cemetery trees, emphasizing the depth of their emotional turmoil. The whimsical touch of Peter flying down into a hole reflects feelings of insignificance and loss, all culminating in a surreal exploration of love, betrayal, and existential confusion.

    There is a lot of excitement for a lover.

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