Once, I thought I was lost in the dark.
Stumbling through the thick air of nothingness;
I would fall, again and again.
Never able to find the light, I was trapped.
My thoughts became monsters, hunting me down.
It took some time for me to realize
I wasn’t lost in the darkness, as I had imagined for so long.
I was the dark, simply lost within myself.
That was the moment that I not only turned on the light, I became the light.
very true life’s about bouncing back and finding true self and happiness
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Bouncing back is the only option.
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Excellent ๐
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I was looking at an empty pot which is dark inside and when it breaks there is only light …sorry a random thought ..great post thanks
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Maybe a metaphor in there? ๐๐โจโ๏ธ
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I feel like someone wrote me๐ฅบโค๏ธ
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Nice post very well described imagination .
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Intresting
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Good post. Good luck ๐ฒ
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I liked your words
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Wow
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Beautifully written
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Beautifully said how we are trapped in our thoughts and when we reach the lights, it’s our freedom.
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Very beautiful and relatable. I loved reading it.โค๏ธ Beautiful Poem โค๏ธ
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Very beautiful post
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Resonates alot with where I’m at
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Beautiful!!
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It’s amazing how you’ve turned struggle into strength. Shining on! โจ
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This poignant and introspective blog post beautifully captures the journey from darkness to self-awareness and empowerment. ๐
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When I read it again , I just lost in your expression !
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nice read!
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Congratulations!
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The realization that the darkness was not an external force but rather a manifestation of internal struggles is powerful and uplifting. ๐
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wow…amzing
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Momentous. Nicely done๐ซก
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Nice
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This gave me chills. Thank you!
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I was the dark, lost within myself…..
I’ve got all my answers I was looking for,
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Wow, I like the poem. I wish I can make a beautiful poem like this.
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Only thoughts sometimes face the other aspect of light which is shadow…not human itself. Well written.
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This is a nice perspective on fear and uncertainty. ๐
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Beautifully written-
โI was the dark, simply lost within myself.โ
Yes
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Lost in the darkness of my mind
It was hard, I was alone
I wanted to give up
For something I fought very hard
Darkness was lost and I was in light
That’s when I saw
I was not alone
Darkness was mine
The fight was mine
But thosr who loved me
Were fighting harder than me
Blessed is me and people who have such friends and family
With than we can win fights and live happily
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This is beautiful…sometimes I feel like sometimes I am in that darkness
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Dear Amber,
I would like to resonate with such a forest imagery in this poem entitled “Becoming The Light” by inviting you to take a stroll with me in the Birch Forest Landscape with Mushrooms:
May all of you find the rest of 2024 very much to your liking and highly conducive to your thinking, writing, reading, photographing and blogging whatever topics that take your intellectual fantasy and creative reverie in all their depths, diversity and profundity!
Take care and prosper!
Yours sincerely,
SoundEagle
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Enticing work of poetry!
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Excellent. Beautiful and awesome.
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Thank you for sharing your story
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Wow, wonderful piece โจ
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Yeah that’s nice ๐
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