I am a breeze, rustling through the Autumn leaves.
Crisp clean air that revitalizes the land.
I am a ray of sunshine, blanketing the Earth with my warmth.
Providing the light for all life.
I am the rain, washing the dust of the day away.
Breathing new life into everything I touch.
I am a tree, standing tall above the grass.
Holding firm in my roots, creating a shelter.
I am the sand, simple enough.
Infinite grains creating a pathway to walk the beach.
I am a wave, traveling the vast sea.
Finally, ending my life gracefully against the shore.
written by
2015
Amber Lynn Manning
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I am not a religious person Joshua thank you for your comment though. ๐
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Woww is not enough. Great poetry
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Vast relation and becoming-other is such a key to insight, and to this world showing its glory and loveability. You bring me to such a sweet brink with this poem. The ecstatic moment of I am the sand, simple enough”!
Thank you, thank you.
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Youโre welcome Richard. Thank you for your detailed analysis of my poem. I appreciate your feedback.๐
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This post is beautifully written, capturing the essence of nature in such a poetic and descriptive way. The use of personification to describe the elements of nature is both unique and captivating. It paints a vivid picture in the reader’s mind and truly showcases the beauty of the natural world. Well done!
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What a beautiful and inspiring post! Your words paint a picture of the natural elements, each with its own unique characteristics and purpose. Your metaphor of being a breeze, ray of sunshine, rain, tree, sand and a wave, creates an imagery of how nature is always in motion and how it connects to the world. Your words are truly a reminder of the beauty and simplicity of nature, and how it can be an endless source of inspiration. The post reminds me of how nature always finds a way to balance itself and how everything is connected. Thank you for sharing this thought-provoking post.
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Thank you for taking the time to read and analyze my poem. You found all of my symbolism. Iโm going to check out your blog. ๐โจ
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Thank you for sharing your poem with me, it was a pleasure to read and analyze it. I’m glad you found my feedback helpful. I’ll be looking forward to read more of your work and I am happy that you are interested in my blog.
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At last in this poem you also dying i ask where is true immortality
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Impressive expression
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Nice and touching.
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This is a breath of fresh air on a dreary morning.
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From one Amber to another, this was beautifully written.
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I don’t normally read poetry but this was so gentle and beautiful. So calming and lovely. Thank you for sharing this gift with us.
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The photo too was amazing. A perfect accompaniment to the lovely poem. The colour was so soothing just like the gentle sweet words of the poem.
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Wow you must be really popular, you got alot of comments. I wish I could get some.
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